The Mind Gamer...telling stories that make you think....again !
Wednesday, June 16, 2010
Fate (Episode 5 of 5)
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22 comments:
Sanjay G Kothari
said...
Hey ABC, ur blogs generate a deep sense of involvement and curiosity amongst the readers. its imperative from ur blogs that u ll make a gud writer/novelist some day.. lemme no if i can be of any help in this process. live tat dream....
The whole story is amazing, and i wish that Jessica Alba + Somebody Else both will be in next part (m sure u will write the sequel).
its like a d famous dilogue " Have you ever had a dream, Neo, that you were so sure was real. What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?"
U r surely an amazing writer, waiting for the sequel to read :):) - Abhishek Kumar
i thnk its shrutee...coz its nt at all obvious dat jessica wd call...n GOD wnt b realistic enough...bt it vl b a twist if its sm1 else(4m a reader's pnt of view)..if u imagined vrythng urself its really 2 gd...i thnk u shd publish a book on dis...u vl gt many followers...infact 1 book in BDCOE wd do d job 4 u
In an unbiased and frank opinion, I simply love your blog and the maturity you have in your writing, I truly respect that...I mean it....Not to deny one special line on which your whole story is based on 'I would experience a lot of things in fiction; but learn only in real life'- Simply awesome and inspiring....I think there is much an individual can learn from you....Hats off.....
just awesome...extraordinary !!..out of dis world imagination..dnt no u personally..but hav becum a fan of urs...d way u wrote..d way those transitions happened in ur story were 'smooth'(just lyk u described 'em in ur story)..d flow of d story was natural n smooth...Keep up d gud work bro..God Bless !!
gud one....i didn;t knew u write as well... keep writing gud stuffs... & regarding the question,just lyke any other KKKK.....stories,im sure, u dont even by ur self knw who dt cud be???lolzzzzzzzzzzzz keep doing the gud work!!!
ooppss.... i forgot to comment here :( everythn the same wat i wrote on facebook..... jst wanna add certain thn..... no .. no .. nthn serious !!
dude... i never felt as if the stories r ritten by ma frnd....!! i jst devleop the same intrest n curosity as i develop readin a fiction novel by any famous author !! lots of maturity is there in ur writings ...... !! wat else... jst keep it up... god bless u :)
first time on ur blog.. n m stuck here thinking of all the guddies n adjectives to appreciate the "treat my eyes" just got. loved the narration..u have the power to hold n grasp the adrenaline levels,,, cnt wait to read on more....... yeah dil mange more............ ;)
whoaaa..dat was some story man..awesome...still thinking..still into it...n thinking y do good stories have to have n ending...u better write a sequel ok..u better do...nd dat line whre u said ' wud experience a lot of thngs in fiction but learn only in real life..loved it..well said !! u surely gonna b d best read writer once u start writing..n u surely got a reader, follower n admirer in me...u know wat people wud like n want to read..it was truly a delight..!!! loved it:)
well...... just read this, i just thought of giving a new turn to the story...as i felt it to be, n as the ans. to ur above question-
That night he got a call that changed everything, he didn’t realise that his left n right hemispheres were on a toss again or was it for real…. Coz that night when he pressed the green button on his phone, he heard ‘him’ say ‘hello’……. No matter how he said that he had learnt to distinguish and draw lines between transitions , he didn’t know how to react. With throat choked, trying to reciprocate to his own voice addressing him on the other end of the call, his mind was on a boomerang of thoughts generating a tetrad of impulses to get a check or no-check , giving conclusions and pointing facts that he wasn’t dreaming. But if that is the case then how come this is happening. No matter how much he loved namrata, she was the last person he had in mind that time . He was talking to himself, feeling haunted. A “me” questioned “me” and threw up this question after a warm hello that- enough of the transitions and the real and the non real, leav apart other things, do u think I m real? Do u remember ur own reflections or even that has been left to the mercy of your left-right game??? For the first time he was numb.. not knowing , how on earth is a person supposed to answer to a question lyk this and that too from ur own self on a call to u, and u still need to figure out whether u r haunted , or dreaming or dead……….
22 comments:
Hey ABC, ur blogs generate a deep sense of involvement and curiosity amongst the readers. its imperative from ur blogs that u ll make a gud writer/novelist some day.. lemme no if i can be of any help in this process. live tat dream....
Thanks,
Sanjay
Super COol..
U betta continue dats an order from your Teacher..
@sanjay: thanx man...u r as inspiring as always...
@my fav teacher: i will...
umm...got goose bumps dis timee...i think shrutee must have called...wait or may b god...nono wait...it can be jessica alba too..!! ;)
i think thats shrutee.. howevever, whoever it is.. i want you to make it jessica alba...
good work buddy...
- Real Sourav
Dude very interesting:) Read all the parts at a go but can't figure out who called.. Anyways would love to read the sequel:) Keep up the good work
@real sourav: pray to god...
@ajoy: thnx man....plz follow the blog.
@rashu: OMG....was it dat confusing... :P?
Hey! make it jessica alba the only option...nice one..After all, we all are part of it "SPLASH " i meant.. lalith
The whole story is amazing, and i wish that Jessica Alba + Somebody Else both will be in next part (m sure u will write the sequel).
its like a d famous dilogue " Have you ever had a dream, Neo, that you were so sure was real. What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?"
U r surely an amazing writer, waiting for the sequel to read :):)
- Abhishek Kumar
Hey..that was some interesting story..like someone said it gets you hooked on...
I think the psychiatrist calls!
@abhi n lalith: how desperate u guys are about Jessica Alba !!! (Even I am...lol :)
@sushma: thanx ya....
i thnk its shrutee...coz its nt at all obvious dat jessica wd call...n GOD wnt b realistic enough...bt it vl b a twist if its sm1 else(4m a reader's pnt of view)..if u imagined vrythng urself its really 2 gd...i thnk u shd publish a book on dis...u vl gt many followers...infact 1 book in BDCOE wd do d job 4 u
In an unbiased and frank opinion, I simply love your blog and the maturity you have in your writing, I truly respect that...I mean it....Not to deny one special line on which your whole story is based on 'I would experience a lot of things in fiction; but learn only in real life'- Simply awesome and inspiring....I think there is much an individual can learn from you....Hats off.....
just awesome...extraordinary !!..out of dis world imagination..dnt no u personally..but hav becum a fan of urs...d way u wrote..d way those transitions happened in ur story were 'smooth'(just lyk u described 'em in ur story)..d flow of d story was natural n smooth...Keep up d gud work bro..God Bless !!
gud one....i didn;t knew u write as well...
keep writing gud stuffs...
& regarding the question,just lyke any other KKKK.....stories,im sure, u dont even by ur self knw who dt cud be???lolzzzzzzzzzzzz
keep doing the gud work!!!
ooppss.... i forgot to comment here :( everythn the same wat i wrote on facebook..... jst wanna add certain thn..... no .. no .. nthn serious !!
dude... i never felt as if the stories r ritten by ma frnd....!! i jst devleop the same intrest n curosity as i develop readin a fiction novel by any famous author !!
lots of maturity is there in ur writings ...... !! wat else... jst keep it up... god bless u :)
first time on ur blog.. n m stuck here thinking of all the guddies n adjectives to appreciate the "treat my eyes" just got. loved the narration..u have the power to hold n grasp the adrenaline levels,,, cnt wait to read on more.......
yeah dil mange more............ ;)
whoaaa..dat was some story man..awesome...still thinking..still into it...n thinking y do good stories have to have n ending...u better write a sequel ok..u better do...nd dat line whre u said ' wud experience a lot of thngs in fiction but learn only in real life..loved it..well said !! u surely gonna b d best read writer once u start writing..n u surely got a reader, follower n admirer in me...u know wat people wud like n want to read..it was truly a delight..!!! loved it:)
KIKASS WRITE... fun readin.. but iv seen both the movies....
well...... just read this, i just thought of giving a new turn to the story...as i felt it to be, n as the ans. to ur above question-
That night he got a call that changed everything, he didn’t realise that his left n right hemispheres were on a toss again or was it for real…. Coz that night when he pressed the green button on his phone, he heard ‘him’ say ‘hello’……. No matter how he said that he had learnt to distinguish and draw lines between transitions , he didn’t know how to react. With throat choked, trying to reciprocate to his own voice addressing him on the other end of the call, his mind was on a boomerang of thoughts generating a tetrad of impulses to get a check or no-check , giving conclusions and pointing facts that he wasn’t dreaming.
But if that is the case then how come this is happening. No matter how much he loved namrata, she was the last person he had in mind that time .
He was talking to himself, feeling haunted. A “me” questioned “me” and threw up this question after a warm hello that- enough of the transitions and the real and the non real, leav apart other things, do u think I m real? Do u remember ur own reflections or even that has been left to the mercy of your left-right game???
For the first time he was numb.. not knowing , how on earth is a person supposed to answer to a question lyk this and that too from ur own self on a call to u, and u still need to figure out whether u r haunted , or dreaming or dead……….
@ Taniya- that was something else..really scary actually..u have got some imagination, gal!! wonderful..wat do u say abc?
my say...taniya should try fiction now...high time..
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