read all ur episodes in 1 go...u generally build up a story darn well..dis i found out frm all ur stories.. here d riting wht i felt was bcomes informal at times..u knw as sum1 commentd prior like as in blog format..so try 2 avoid dat..also wht i felt was d recent chap has resemblence wit d moonwalk..d plot..i mean..wht do u feel??
nd glad 2 see u tuk my suggestion..keep riting all d best!!!
kooooolll........i read ur episodes all in one stretch...trust me i m waiting for more to cum.. on a li'l serious note, bring a li'l more depth..though its already captivating..... happy writing....:):)
horribly late to comment.... sorry...... ok, now coming back to the post..i don't need to tell i guess that as usual , i loved it.... loved the last part even more....but just felt one thing ,, that sometimes u get carried away with a plot base and loose depth ..... i was hoping for some more elaboration on the "y" of best person thing.... though...loved the narration....
@taniya: i have revealed the best person 2006 casually...the story is on the best person 2007...n that won't be revealed as easily...dont worry :) @juzar: thnx for the input bro...i'll try n avoid the blog format...n ya..its very different from moonwalk... @pooja: i'll try working on the depth for sure. @rashoo: thanx :)
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read all ur episodes in 1 go...u generally build up a story darn well..dis i found out frm all ur stories..
here d riting wht i felt was bcomes informal at times..u knw as sum1 commentd prior like as in blog format..so try 2 avoid dat..also wht i felt was d recent chap has resemblence wit d moonwalk..d plot..i mean..wht do u feel??
nd glad 2 see u tuk my suggestion..keep riting all d best!!!
Felt Like I was Actually living in the moment...Wonderful..! :)
kooooolll........i read ur episodes all in one stretch...trust me i m waiting for more to cum..
on a li'l serious note, bring a li'l more depth..though its already captivating.....
happy writing....:):)
horribly late to comment....
sorry......
ok, now coming back to the post..i don't need to tell i guess that as usual , i loved it....
loved the last part even more....but just felt one thing ,, that sometimes u get carried away with a plot base and loose depth .....
i was hoping for some more elaboration on the "y" of best person thing....
though...loved the narration....
@taniya: i have revealed the best person 2006 casually...the story is on the best person 2007...n that won't be revealed as easily...dont worry :)
@juzar: thnx for the input bro...i'll try n avoid the blog format...n ya..its very different from moonwalk...
@pooja: i'll try working on the depth for sure.
@rashoo: thanx :)
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